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CUTS

Summary

CUTS — Loyalty. Love. Betrayal. Redemption. Malik was raised by the streets, where loyalty is everything, money comes fast, and trusting the wrong person can cost you your life. But one wrong turn leads him into a neighborhood barbershop, where a man named Ray offers him something the streets never could a second chance. As Malik trades guns for clippers, he discovers a world of competition, ambition, and opportunity. Then there’s Mia a beautiful, independent woman who catches his attention without even trying. But falling in love isn’t easy when your past refuses to let you go. Old friends become enemies. Jealousy turns dangerous. Secrets threaten relationships. And the people closest to Malik may be the very ones plotting his downfall. Caught between the woman he wants, the brotherhood he once trusted, and the future he’s fighting for, Malik must decide what loyalty really means. Because in a world where everybody wants a cut, somebody always ends up bleeding. Put the guns down. Pick the clippers up.

Status
9h ago
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

The turn around


Put the gun down. Pick the clippers up.

Season One • Chapter One: The Wrong Turn

The streets had taught Malik one thing: nobody was coming to save him.

At twenty-two years old, he’d already seen enough to understand that life wasn’t fair. Bills didn’t stop coming because you were broke. Hunger didn’t care about pride. And loyalty? Loyalty only lasted until somebody had something to lose.

It was almost ten o’clock at night.

Malik sat behind the wheel of his car, staring at the barbershop across the street.

Ray’s Barbershop.

The OPEN sign was off, but the lights inside were still burning.

Malik glanced at his gas gauge.

Almost empty.

He checked his bank account.

Eleven dollars and forty-three cents.

He laughed to himself, but there wasn’t anything funny about it.

His phone vibrated.

A message from Dre.

“You still sitting there?”

Malik ignored it.

Another message appeared.

“Bro, get the money and get out. Ain’t nothing to think about.”

Malik looked at the gun resting on the passenger seat.

He’d been in trouble before. Fought before. Done things he wasn’t proud of.

But tonight felt different.

He wasn’t afraid of holding a gun.

He was afraid of what might happen if he actually used it.

His phone rang.

Dre.

Malik answered.

“What?”

“Man, what’s taking you so long?”

“I’m watching the place.”

“Watching what? It’s a barbershop, not a bank.”

Malik rubbed his forehead.

“Man, I said I got it.”

Dre’s voice hardened.

“Look, little brother. You told me you needed money. I gave you a play. Don’t start acting funny now.”

Malik looked toward the shop.

Through the window, he could see an older man sweeping the floor.

“Yeah. Aight.”

He hung up.

For a few seconds, he sat in silence.

Then he picked up the gun.

Tucked it into his waistband.

And stepped out of the car.

Tonight was supposed to be simple.

Walk in.

Get the money.

Walk out.

But Malik was about to discover that sometimes the wrong turn leads you exactly where you’re supposed to be.

The bell above the barbershop door rang.

Ray was sweeping hair from underneath the last chair.

“We closed, youngblood.”

Malik stood near the entrance.

“I ain’t here for a haircut.”

Ray stopped sweeping.

He looked up.

Malik pulled the gun.

“Open the register.”

The shop went quiet.

The music playing from a small speaker suddenly seemed louder.

Ray looked at the weapon.

Then at Malik.

He didn’t scream.

Didn’t run.

He simply leaned the broom against the wall.

“You ever shot somebody before?”

Malik tightened his grip.

“Man, open the register!”

Ray studied his face.

“You look nervous.”

“I ain’t nervous!”

“Then why your hand shaking?”

Malik glanced at his hand.

“Man, stop playing with me!”

Ray slowly walked toward the front door.

Malik raised the gun higher.

“Where you going?”

Ray turned the lock.

“Making sure nobody else walks in here and gets hurt.”

Malik stared at him.

“You think this a game?”

“Nah,” Ray answered. “I think you’re a young man about to make a decision that’s gonna follow you for the rest of your life.”

“Man, you don’t know me.”

Ray nodded.

“You’re right. I don’t.”

He paused.

“But I know desperation when I see it.”

Malik looked away.

Ray continued.

“You hungry?”

“What?”

“I asked if you hungry.”

“Man, what that got to do with anything?”

“Because somebody who walks into a barbershop after closing with a gun usually ain’t doing too good.”

Malik’s jaw tightened.

“Just give me the money.”

Ray looked toward the register.

Then back at Malik.

“You know how much money in that register?”

Malik didn’t answer.

“Maybe a couple hundred dollars. Maybe less.”

“Then open it.”

Ray shook his head.

“You willing to throw your whole life away for a couple hundred dollars?”

Malik stepped closer.

“You don’t understand, old man. I need that money.”

Ray’s expression changed.

For the first time, his voice became firm.

“And you think you’re the first person who ever needed money?”

Malik went silent.

Ray pointed toward the barber chairs.

“You see these chairs?”

Malik glanced over.

“What about them?”

“Every one of them fed my family. Paid my bills. Kept my lights on. Put food on my table.”

Malik scoffed.

“Congratulations.”

Ray ignored the sarcasm.

“But there was a time I didn’t have none of this.”

He looked directly at Malik.

“I know what it’s like to stand where you’re standing.”

Malik frowned.

“What you mean?”

Ray paused.

“Let’s just say I wasn’t always the man you see standing here.”

Something about the way he said it made Malik listen.

Ray pulled out a barber chair.

“Come here.”

Malik laughed.

“Man, you crazy.”

“Maybe.”

Ray placed his hand on the chair.

“But I’m gonna give you two choices.”

He pointed toward the register.

“You can take what’s in there. It’ll probably get you through tonight. Maybe tomorrow.”

Then he pointed toward the chair.

“Or you can put that gun away, sit down, and learn something that’ll feed you for the rest of your life.”

Malik stared at him.

“You offering me a job?”

“I’m offering you an opportunity.”

“You don’t even know me.”

“You’re right.”

Ray stepped aside.

“But somebody gave me a chance when I didn’t deserve one.”

Malik looked at the gun in his hand.

His phone vibrated again.

Dre.

He ignored it.

Ray watched him.

“What’s your name, youngblood?”

Malik hesitated.

“Malik.”

Ray nodded.

“Well, Malik, my name’s Ray.”

He extended his hand.

Malik looked at it.

Then back at the gun.

“Man, you really ain’t scared?”

Ray gave a small smile.

“Being scared and showing fear are two different things.”

Malik slowly lowered the weapon.

Ray didn’t move.

A few seconds passed.

Then Malik tucked the gun into his waistband.

Ray looked him directly in the eyes.

“Listen to me, youngblood. These streets will teach you how to take a life, but they won’t teach you how to build one.”

Malik stood silently.

Ray continued.

“You got a choice to make. You can keep carrying that gun, letting the streets decide how your story ends. Or you can learn to build something nobody can take from you.”

He stepped toward the barber station and picked up a pair of clippers.

Then he turned back to Malik.

“Put the gun down. Pick the clippers up.”

Malik stared at the clippers.

For a moment, he didn’t know what to say.

Ray extended them toward him.

“One can take everything away from you. The other can help you build a future.”

Malik slowly reached out and took them.

He’d held guns before.

But he’d never held a pair of clippers.

And somehow, the clippers felt heavier.

Ray nodded toward the chair.

“Have a seat.”

Malik looked confused.

“For what?”

“Sit down.”

Malik reluctantly sat.

Ray grabbed a barber cape and fastened it around his neck.

“Man, I ain’t come here for no haircut.”

Ray smiled.

“I know.”

He took the clippers back, plugged them in, and flipped the switch.

Bzzzzzz.

Malik looked at him through the mirror.

“What you doing?”

Ray held the clippers in his hand.

“Showing you what your future could sound like.”

Malik shook his head.

“Man, you got a saying for everything.”

Ray chuckled.

“Only when somebody needs to hear it.”

He switched off the clippers.

“Come back tomorrow morning. Eight o’clock.”

Malik raised an eyebrow.

“For real?”

“For real.”

“I don’t know nothing about cutting hair.”

“Neither did I when I started.”

Malik stood up.

Ray reached into his pocket and pulled out a twenty-dollar bill.

“Here.”

Malik looked at the money.

“What’s that for?”

“Gas. So you ain’t got an excuse not to show up.”

Malik hesitated.

“Ain’t nothing free in this world. What you want from me?”

Ray looked him directly in the eyes.

“Consistency.”

Malik didn’t speak.

“Show up tomorrow. That’s all I’m asking.”

Malik slowly accepted the money.

Then he headed toward the door.

Before he could leave, Ray called out.

“Malik.”

He turned.

“Yeah?”

Ray’s expression grew serious.

“Whatever life you living outside these doors, don’t bring it into my shop.”

Malik nodded.

Ray continued.

“And one more thing.”

“What?”

“Don’t mistake somebody giving you a chance for somebody being weak.”

Malik studied him.

For a brief moment, he wondered exactly who Ray used to be.

But he didn’t ask.

He walked outside.

The night air felt different.

His problems hadn’t disappeared.

He was still broke.

Still behind on bills.

Still connected to people who expected things from him.

But for the first time in a long time, somebody had looked at him and seen something other than trouble.

Malik climbed into his car.

His phone rang.

Dre.

He answered.

“What’s good?”

Dre wasted no time.

“Where the money at?”

Malik looked down at the twenty-dollar bill in his hand.

“Ain’t no money.”

“What you mean ain’t no money?”

“Something came up.”

Dre laughed.

“Man, don’t tell me you went soft.”

Malik looked back toward the barbershop.

Through the window, he could see Ray turning off the lights.

“Nah.”

“Then what happened?”

Malik paused.

“For the first time, somebody gave me another option.”

Dre went quiet.

Then he laughed.

“Bro, what the hell is you talking about?”

Malik started the engine.

“I’ll hit you tomorrow.”

“Malik, don’t hang up this—”

The call ended.

Across town, Dre stared at his phone.

His smile disappeared.

He looked toward another man sitting beside him.

“What’s up?” the man asked.

Dre shook his head.

“Man, this dude tripping.”

“What happened?”

Dre leaned back.

“Talking about somebody gave him another option.”

The man laughed.

Dre didn’t.

He opened Malik’s contact again.

Then quietly said:

“Everybody wanna change until that old life come knocking.”

Back at the barbershop, Ray stood alone in the darkness.

He looked toward the chair Malik had been sitting in.

Then toward an old photograph hanging behind his station.

In the picture, Ray was much younger.

Standing beside three men.

One of them had his arm around Ray’s shoulders.

Ray stared at the photograph for a long moment.

Then turned it facedown.

“Lord,” he whispered, “don’t let that boy make the same mistakes I made.”

He switched off the final light.

And locked the door.

Neither Ray nor Malik knew it yet.

But that night, their lives had become connected.

One man was trying to escape his past.

The other was about to be forced to confront his.

And somewhere between the streets and a barber chair, both men would discover that changing your life doesn’t mean your past stops looking for you.

END OF CHAPTER ONE

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This story did not go in the direction I expected it too. I like it. I have high hopes for Malik. I hope he learns how to earn money without violence. Be a man. He has a good start. 👍

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