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A Promise in Crimson

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Summary

A poem about breaking promises.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Adalyn
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

i'm hoping you'll notice

The creeping sclerosis

that I cannot stop from freezing my heart.

but I̷̟̿͌͋̇͆̃̕͝ ̵̻̈́͒̊̆͆̎͗͂͝ͅp̴̨̛̪̬̯̬͚̺̻̹̒̒̈̆̉̔͠͝r̴̨̤̣̝̘̪͆͌͋̐ͅỏ̸̧̞̙̟̞̇̔m̴͔͙̚ỉ̵̧s̴̐͂̔̀͘ͅè̸͔̥̲͉̓̀͗͛̑̓̊ I'll keep you close, sweetheart.

something i've failed from the start.

because " I promise" can't erase what's said

nor heal the cuts, that stain bright red.

too many things I keep in my head.

fore this is something that I cannot conceal

so I'll hide the hurt behind a smile, surreal,

just to fit everyone else's ideal.

And in the end,

They'll never know what's real.

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