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❤❤❤❤❤

"Hot, hot, hot!!!!!! Thanks 💋"

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Best Sexual Disney Story Out There

"This book was phenomenal. If you haven't read it please do, you won't regret it. I am usually a quiet reader so this is a huge thing for me to like and comment let alone write a review! Please, you'll get hooked ;)"

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Want more

"Want a happy ending"

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Awesome

"Interesting with suspense 😋😋"

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Amazing!

"The book is fantastic. Such an imaginative twist on the classic tale!, 💜"

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Hot

"On the whole I really enjoyed this book. The first chapters are a little disjointed- I would have liked to have read about Ariel saving Eric and her deal with Ursula, and the bath house scene felt a little random. But the writing then improved and the story then flowed more nicely "

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Fav erotica book!

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fanfuckingtastic

"Honestly a great erotica book !! I have been reading this since last year and I keep going back to it when my books are boring me 🤣. Really recommend this book, brings a new twist to erotica 😉."

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A must read

"Disney just got a whole lot hotter "

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A wonderful book by a wonderful author

"I loved this Novella. It was short but I found myself waiting for every update on the edge of my seat. I am a huge Disney nerd so it was nice to see someone doing a mature retelling of a classic. There is character development, heartbreak, and erotica all packed into this 13 chapter story. I only wish I had money to buy the bonus chapters. This book was not only a great read but it was written by an amazing author. Maddie replies to every comment and is always so kind to her fans. I would definitely recommend any of her books to a friend!"

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Most sexy 😈 novel

"WOW that novel 👌 is really hott🔥🔥I really enjoyed reading your novel 👌 and can't wait to read more of your novels 💓 💓💓"

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Great

"I loved how the little mermaid was turned very sexual it was awsome"

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Ariel (#1 Maddie’s Erotic Retellings)

"WOW! This was something else. I loved everything about this story. Your writing is so good that it felt like I was inside the story. Truly amazing! Thanks!"

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The book is fantastic

"The book was amazing thank you for writing this story "

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I LOVE THIS

"this book was amazing"

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I want that bonus chapter for free :")

"It's not quite as smooth as I expected, spelling wise, but it was not at all distracting or a turn off. It was a dream cum true :") I love the gender fludity between the male characters; I wasn't expecting that (it was a good suprise). I would love to get all disney characters' stories if that's possible. The girl fell in love with the one who dicked her good; nice. Possible plot improvement would be to add how their love blossomed throughout, not just from constant shagging , turning the story into more of a romace with erotic scenes in them. Ariel does remind us that it was not, but I have a hard : ) time believing her as all she does is constantly shag, not that I'm complaining. So as a result, I felt as if their story was quite forgetful, and I think an easy way to fix that is to get creative with sweet romace stuff. Thank you for this lovely re-telling tale. I enjoyed it throughly. Keep up a good work : )"

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Ariel

"Great read"

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Hot🥵

"This was amazing, every chapter was hot and amazing I wish there was one for every princess story. "

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Really interesting.

"Twists and turns on the original. Think I like this version much better than the original"

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Love!

"I have loved every moment of this story! I need more!"

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