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La Vida Apesta

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Summary

Una recopilación de poemas y textos originales.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Yuko
Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Valle Silencioso

Luego de que el arduo combate cesará su furia sangrienta

Los cuatro quedaron parados sobre el suelo sucio y polvoriento de sus acciones observando el silencio paralizante donde hace prácticamente nada hubieron varias voces furiosas

No eran diez, quince o veinte, ni siquiera eso

Eran decenas de cadáveres esparcidos sobre el árido suelo como si hubieran caído del cielo donde alguna vez hubieron almas

Sin embargo había unos muy pocos que aún estaban agonizando y jadeando en una lucha por respirar en un intento desesperado de hacer su condición compatible con la vida lo máximo posible

Uno de los asesinos dio un paso, luego otro y uno mas

Hasta quedar sobre un desgraciado jadeante con una mirada que mezclaba dolor y un profundo miedo ante quien estaba frente a sus narices

El sujeto sin mediar palabra colocó su pesada bota sobre el cuello del desgraciado

Y de un giro de su talón más rápido que cualquier viento

El cuello del hombre hizo un chasquido desagradable y la vida empezó a abandonar su cuerpo

El asesino sin cambiar de expresión facial sacudió ligeramente su cabeza de lado a lado arrugando ligeramente su nariz

Luego sus ojos giraron a uno de los cuerpos que estaba a unos pocos centímetros

Lo que alguna vez fue un hombre mayor

Ahora reducido a un muñeco roto

Un recipiente donde alguna vez hubo una vida

Este tenia las manos sobre el pecho manchado de rojo con los dedos torcidos

Y una expresión vacía de dolor y profunda acusación que parecía perseguir a quien estaba frente a su cadáver

Sus ojos alguna vez brillantes

Ahora estaban clavados a la nada carentes de vida, con sus pupilas vueltas de un color castaño opaco

Detrás llegaba uno de ellos llevando su característica sonrisa de dientes naranjas y mirada seca

Este simplemente hizo un gesto moviendo su cabeza hacia un lado en señal de continuar

Sin mediar palabras este acepto con la mirada clavada al suelo y continuaron su viaje en un silencio más vacío que las cientas de almas robadas regadas sobre el árido valle.

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Hey! I think it's wonderful that you're continuing to put effort into your work and trying to make it better The process isn't always easy but the patience and experience you gain along the way can be just as valuable as the final result I hope you keep believing in your abilities and enjoy seeing your progress What helps you stay focused when you have a lot to do?

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