My review

"While the plot or storyline was fantastic, I feel like u rushed through time to much. Not giving information on how many days, months or years had past. Like at the end when it jumped 10 yrs into the future, with no hint as to how many yrs. I also think bc it was kinda rushed, so to speak, you skipped over a lot of details. When Daniel and Ashleigh first start there relationship, it's a bit confusing bc u have to really, really read between the lines to find things out. Sorry if I sound judgmental bc it is a lovely story. I Hope there is second book"

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Love conquers all

"This book definitely is filled with love. I like the times when prayer was said throughput the book, indicating the characters strong faith. I liked the love conquers all and it was tied with prayer and Gods love. There was sometimes when I was lost and didn’t understand what was going on. Example was the two main characters. I didn’t think their being a couple was clear. The time line on the book was not clear in some areas. For example the jump from chapter to chapter in the being was pretty consist but in later chapters towards the end the book jumped 12 years without induction, adding several characters that I was left trying to figure out who they were and how they belonged. I feel these areas needed some better transition notifiers. The sentences were very long and used several “ands” in one sentence at times. This caused confusion. I enjoyed the police and ranch settings and was able to relate to the characters and drowned myself in their lives, wondering what was going to come next. There was not a lot of inappropriateness and throughout the book, the Bible teachings were consist to the Christian values and morals. Thank you for writing this book. I have enjoyed it. I would recommend it. "

Good plot but a bit demanding to read

"The plot is good, with strong believable conversations that i can vividly imagine. There are issues with punctuation marks, too few i think, and a lot of use of the word "and", - that made it a bit arduous to read. Interesting plot though. Still reading."

couldnt get past first chapter

"the storyline seemed so intriguing, and unique. sadly I couldn’t get past the first chapter. Author used the word “and” too much i couldn’t continue reading. Hopefully when the book is edited, i can try to read it again. Great idea for a story though."