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"jgrande85, you have put much effort into your new book, with fine descriptions of the circumstances surrounding your characters, and the environment..Being aboard your ship, with hopefully wishers someday arriving in Canada is a story within the story...........well done, only suggestion is the editing, grammar and punctuation issues..........you might wish to read your story outloud to yourself, an old writing trick, to find the places in your story that may need smoozing...........otherwise..........congratulations on your submission and a new future awaiting you as an Author........................william Elliott."