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What is your opinion?

Amazing

"You wrote very well. I'm speechless. It's amazing. You have a sequel to write, don't you? "

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Great

"I think the book was amazing and it was the one I was searching I would all of you to read it. It fill with twist and turns"

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Lovely book.

"I like the story, plot and all.. 👍 "

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Chance of Fate

"Great story with a unique concept."

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Chance of fate

"Very interesting story Full of questions Impatient to know what happen next"

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Chance of fate

"It was a very good story, that left you on the edge if your seat right up to the very beautiful end."

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Chance of Fate

"I loved it. Cant wait for a second book. "

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Envision of chance

"The story is very beautifully written. Every sentence and words makes the story more understandable. There is a vision within a vision of the story. I m just loving it. Cause I believe in supernatural facts"

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Chance

"Good writing skills have been shown by the author. I personally found it a bit fast going. Best of luck to the author "

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Ahmad

"Somewhere the plot although good is not tight enough. The mother Patricia is not well explained, why she is one sided to Lillith. The actual power of both Chance and her twin brother in relation to their eldest sister is also not described. In all, why is it so important for Chance to be the most powerful?"

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Gifted

"Awesome Does it have another part? Would love to read "

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Very interesting, but the way it was ended isn't good enough

"Awesome story. I wonder why you people don't normally finish up your stories though 🤨. "

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Incredible

"I am really happy to choose this one.....so far I did not got anything to dislike ...really liked it"

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My opinion.

"The story is good but the feelings in the story is not comming up because of lack of appropriate words and Insufficent writing skills. "

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Empirical do happen

"It is a good past time I will ask my friends to re ad"

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