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Just like Mafia Indebted, Mafia collateral is a beautifully written book, it shows how can pride, mistrust, love, obsession and psychological trauma can ruin our lives, making us unable to find peace and happiness. It is a dark romance that makes you ferl all types of emotions, that wants makes you hate, sympathize, empathize and pity. This book is as good as Mafia Indebted. I love it. There are good life lessons found in it.

"The book is just a masterpiece, it has lots of literary elements, the plot is well-defined, the characters aren't static. This is art."

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Mafia collateral

"In one sentence, give this book a shot. I m sure you won’t disappoint?"

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Amazing

"The best thing about this story is it makes you feel emotions.Anger,hurt,love,fear,excitement...and the characters are strong too,a plus thing about story."

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Title is according to the STORY

"I'm amazed by your writing skills... I am also a medical student....die heart fan of literature...your way of writing is very impressive"

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Soooo freaking loving it

"Hi I wanted you to know you are a very good writer. I really enjoy your books no I freaking love love your book. I really want to request you plz plz don't stop writing this book in here.plz with a cherry on top.LOVE THIS BOOK."

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Awesome

"Cant stop checking for updates... it makes the day to see an update... the stories are amazing..."

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GREAT BOOK

"i love the plot in fact i love everything about the book"

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The Story had reached its peak of intensity

"When I first read the other book, Shehryars story, I truly was in contempt of his actions but I couldn't stop because of the incredible character density. I wanted him to be more understanding and empathetic yet powerful and possessive to fit the story perfectly. Zameer is all that. I'm in absolute love with their character development and how the author focuses on the magnitude of their emotions. "

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Wonderful

"I love the everything about this story. I just hope Zameer does the right thing and it's not too late"

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Enticing and definitely worth the read

"Mafia Collateral is one of my most favourite books in the series although it being the 2nd book its plot is just as amazing as the first. The author does an amazing job at creating suspense and leaving the reader utterly confused at the intentions of the characters, which thus leaves their next moves unpredictable. As well as this, the characters psychological state and perception is exhibited cleverly that it causes the reader to become perplexed whether to hate or love them. Also the story-line is great and with each character holding onto their own personas along with the added suspense elevates the desire to continue wanting to know what happens next. Thus, Mafia Collateral overall is a wonderful story and personally i cannot wait for its completion ❤"

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Mafia collateral

"So far so good..love everything about this book. I wish there were updates everyday. "

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Best dark romance

"The story takes me to a magical place where no one dissaponts me. She is, for sure, the best writer ever. "

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GREAT BOOK

"I love this book!!"

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Mafia collateral

"I enjoyed this book an I can’t wait to see as it ends it’s left me desperate to see what each chapter holds for the characters"

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Great

"Amazing work "

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It's Ahhh-mazing❣️ Read all the chapters in 3 days

"It's an awesome story with an amazing plot. It got me so engrossed that I kept on reading without pause or break. I recommended it to my sister's. Love it, Allah bless you!"

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Awesome book though despite the very slow updates

"I wish you updated more often...it feel like a century now. Sometimes I keep forgetting the plot too..but if you wonder about the book it is an awesome book anyways nice writing🤟🏻"

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mafias collateral

"ohh i am so in love with the story plot , the character and especially the character development , i loved how sadia stood firm with her decision , i loved the way zameer fell for her and i loved how sadia is yet to fall in love with him ,"

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Mafia Collateral

"Love this story "

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Amazing

"I love the character development. Each chapter makes me fall in love with Zameer. But Sadia’s pov is right too. I am loving this storyyy!"

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