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Confused friendship
"I just loved it . You can write this kind of stories"
This is A very interesting Novel....More Inspiration to rhw Author
"The Novel is really OK I mean Superb!!!😇 Just some few Grammar Errors, But no qualms It's clearly Understood😊"
A Fun Read
"I liked the way you jumped right into the action. The writing style kept things moving. I would suggest maybe one more proof-read to tighten the language. But you were very descriptive. I liked the line, "I continued my journey, lost in my thoughts..." I think that was in chapter 7. I saw you submitted "Confused Friendship" for the novel contest. I'm strongly considering giving it a vote..."
Fine
"Many grammar and language errors. Many times, the POVs were not mentioned. It could have been a bit more specific "
