WHEN MY SISTER AND MY HUSBAND HUGS
Share with your friends
Customize readability

WHEN MY SISTER AND MY HUSBAND HUGS

All Rights Reserved ©

Story Notes

This story was written for every woman who felt cringe but was told she is dramatic, jealous, insecure. Trust your cringe. Cringe is warning. This book is fiction inspired by real Tuesday and Thursday visits, many family WhatsApp groups, and many plates shattered in Durban kitchens. All characters are fiction. All hugs that cringe are real.

Summary

Amara had the perfect love everyone wanted. Until her younger sister Naledi came back from Canada, lonely, beautiful, and needing a second home in Amara's house every Tuesday and Thursday. At first it was just hugs. Long hugs. 10-second hugs where David closed his eyes. But when my sister and my husband hugs, something in me cringes. Amara ignored the cringe, until receipts, perfume, red dresses, beach cafe blue chairs, and a towel in her bedroom told her the cringe was God. A story of sister betrayal, marriage disgrace, plate shattering, and a family meeting that broke — with a final choice no one expected.

Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

SEASON 1: The Love Everyone Wanted


Everyone wanted what Amara and David had.

Not money. Not mansion. Love. That unique love. The kind you see once and pray for.

Amara, 28. Laugh with whole body. David, 31. Calm voice, hands that hold like home. Three years married, no kids yet, by choice. Still boyfriend and girlfriend inside marriage.

Small house in Durban. Not big. Warm. Sunday, after church, they cook together.

_Sizzle_ of chicken in pan. _Brrr_ of blender making juice. _Clink_ of spoon hitting pot. Old radio low, gospel _hmm hmm._

David comes from behind, wraps arms around her waist, chin on her shoulder.

"You smell like curry."

"You smell like mine," she laughs.

At family gatherings, mothers say, "God, give my daughter a David." Friends say, "Amara, you are lucky."

And Amara knows she is lucky. She thanks God every night. Hand on David chest, listening to his heart. _Thump thump._ Steady. Hers.

Her younger sister Naledi is in Canada. 4 years. Studying. Video calls _brrr brrr._

"Sis! You two are disgusting! Stop kissing on camera!"

"We are happily married, you must get used to it!" Amara shouts, David waves behind, shirtless, making Naledi scream and laugh.

Naledi is different. 24. Tall. Sharp tongue. Beauty that doesn't ask — it takes. She is coming back December. For good.

December comes. Summer hot. Airport _hum_ of aircon fighting heat.

Amara runs, slippers _thud thud._ Hugs sister, tears real.

"You are back! You are back!"

Naledi hugs back, smells like expensive foreign perfume. _Pshh._ Cold, not like home.

"You got fat, sis! Marriage feeding you!" She laughs.

That evening, Naledi visits their small house. To see famous marriage everyone talks about.

David opens door. White t-shirt, shorts, at home. Comfortable. Good man.

"Naledi! Canada girl!" He opens arms, big smile.

Amara smiles, "Hug your brother-in-law."

Naledi hugs Amara first. Quick sister hug.

Then hugs David.

And this hug...

It was supposed to be 2 seconds. Respectful.

But Naledi stays. One second longer. Two seconds longer. Her cheek finds his chest. _Thump._ His heart under cotton.

She breathes in. Deep. _Inhhh._

David hands hover in air, awkward, then drop lightly on her back.

Time ticks. Clock _tick tick._

Amara claps, "Okay! Enough! You will break his ribs!"

They break apart. Naledi laughs too loud. David clears throat, chest hot where she touched.

"Welcome home, Naledi," he says, voice a bit low.

Amara laughs too, but something in her stomach does small thing. _Creeek._ Like old door. Small cringe. She ignores it.

She tells herself, "You are dramatic."

But that night, she remembers. When Naledi hugged David, David closed eyes for half second. Like he felt something.

He used to close eyes like that when he hugged HER.

Amara pushes thought away. Pours tea. _Glug glug._

Perfect love. Everyone wanted it.

No one knew that perfect love was about to start cringing, one hug at a time.

Let Love Built By Ink know what you thought about this chapter!

Chapter Notes

Where cringe started. First hug, first cringe. Amara feels something off but ignores.
K.R.Kay
K.R.Kay

Starting is interesting.... showing a beautiful couple...love bond and happy moments...but then naledi comes...i feel exactly what Amara is feeling...why did he close eyes...she maybe feels it's cringe but deep down it's hurt....you write it beautifully author... opening is beautiful 🔥🔥🔥

4 days
1

Further Recommendations

The Rewrite

Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️

Read Now
The Alpha's Exiled Mate (ON HOLD)

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

tatianne Ingrid: Adorei cada capitulo! parabens

Read Now
THE WOMAN HE BOUGHT

AARADHYA BAISLA: This wo soo so so nice I loved the storyline 👏💗

Read Now
SECRET BILLIONAIRE

Katja: Good writing, excellent story.

Read Now
The Grumpy Next Door

mmurphy1008: This book had my attention from the very first chapter! It has romance and humor and just enough tension to keep it moving along. Can’t wait to read more from this author.

Read Now
Ruthless Lord

susiebear2012: Realy enjoyed this so looking forward to more.great story line hope they can achieve getting away from the kings burden. Truly amazing well written well done.

Read Now
The Mate he couldn't have

Sahaya: I like every detail of the story

Read Now
The Orc's Pet

Glenda Holmes: Good read!

Read Now