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The venderleer brothers

"Great story, very exciting, I enjoyed all the twists and turns. Loved thev always smiling too happy town. Thanks, regards Linda "

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Good start!

"Love this series! Only just started but I can tell I am going to enjoy reading it. A lot of intrigue and tension but also some light hearted moments. A nice, easy read!"

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Getting better with every book!!!

"With each book your style is getting better the only thing is that you get to the villain fast needs more suspense. I would recommend this book to anyone who reads.."

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The vendeleer brothers Book 2: serenity hill

"Amazing.... thanks for making me laugh though your books☺️👍"

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The Vendeleer Brothers 2

"The plot was as unique as the first book of this series. The only thing I dislike that it ended too early. But overall again an amazing experience with the Vendeleer Brothers and rest of the friends.❤️"

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V brothers 2

"Another fun story.. glad to know more about Joey .. "

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Serenity hill

"Poor joey... Even the spirit afraid of her... Wkwkwkwk"

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"This is top quality story. You can publish you work on NovelStar App and earn big time."

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The Vendeleer Bros./ Serenity Hills

"I again enjoyed this second book of the series “The Vendeleer Brothers”. I am looking forward to the rest of series. My one complaint is that sometimes I feel the dialogue and actions of the brothers and their friends seems cartoonish and juvenile. I would like to see them act more adult."

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Interesting book

"I am really loving these books. I have read everyone already! "

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Honestly love this book so far 😍😍❤️❤️❤️😍❤️❤️❤️😍

"I love everything about this sequel everything is going perfectly"

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Entertaining

"Good story even teens can read ut and enjoy"

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The Vendeleer Brothers Book 2

"Love this series!👻"

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Vendeleer Brothers book 2

"Another good story , enjoyed your plot ."

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Ohhhh noooo

"Something gunny going down can't wait to read more"

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The Vendeleer Brothers book 2

"I usually don’t read ghost stories. But this one had me binge-reading☺️. "

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Another great story of the Vendeleer Brothers

"Just like the first book, the author quickly grabs your attention and keeps you interested in the plot and the lovable characters. I love how each character has their own distinct personality and it really shows through when the perspective shifts to each one. A couple small critiques: - I think this book would benefit from being a little later in chronology in the series. I think the characters need to be built more and their stories fleshed out a little more before introducing them into an official team dynamic as seen at the end of this book. Having more suspense to lead up to Joey's past by hinting at it in at least one more preceding book would help pique more interest, and developing Joey's story further before revealing her tortured past will help the reader feel comfortable looking past her transgressions. I also think that giving Roderick a little more time battling with his trauma before coming through it and healing would be a good character arc. A book between the first and this one might be beneficial to show more about how his experience is Pinnacle Gulch has shaped his trauma responses. - I felt this book was a little more hasty than the first book. The plot felt a little too fast, and the "Big Bad" was revealed very quickly. Leading up to it and having a little mroe suspense leading up to Elizabeth's reveal would have more of an impact on readers. I am in no way saying the plot was bad! This was a great plot and I liked that the Genie seemed to be a red herring before the real villian was revealed. And using a little boy as the catalyst for the whole plot was very well done. Overall, once this book has been edited and fine-tuned, I can see this being another great success. "

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Who ha

"Ready to read more"

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TVB Book 2: Serenity Hill

"A little short but enjoyed it nonetheless. Let’s see what the next one have to offer. Happy reading!"

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Good book

"Good book but not better than your first"

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