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Fate Fell Short

"Nice read so far. Great punctuation and grammar makes for an easy read."

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Like if so far.

"I like the story line, I dont want to say you should change anything. I'm not a publisher lol. "

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Fate fell short

"Please more of this story please and see how it ends thanks good storty keep the good work 🤗🤗"

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Fate fell short

"Love the plot Could use better spelling but is good enough to understand what words were ment."

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Fate fell short

"I liked that it was filled with emotions and I disliked that there was a lot swearing. Overall it was a good book so far"

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Fate Fell Short

"I am not one for cheesy, overused situations. I read romance with a skeptical front. But this story, this story is amazing. I don't think it's finished, but oh my God, I love it. The plot is amazing, the topic, the character development, everything. It's a beautiful story, and I hope the author continues the story. I'm dying to know what happens next. "

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April

"I really loved the details about each and every character, specially Emma's. She's such a sweetheart. Also the ideas chase came up with to bully Alex were really something else. I really liked every part of it. I am precisely looking forward to the updates (if the writer will make any). Overall this was such an astonishing novel it really inspired me to write my own too. I have many ideas related to the plot of this novel. I'll surely write on one of them in the future. Best wishes to the author. Keep it up."

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Fate fell short

"It's an awesome book, I love the plot and the details about the book. And the way the author describes the way things happen is awesome. I would recommend it."

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