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I've reread this like 8 times in the past 6 years

"Genuinely have never seen better writing for a novel anywhere on Wattpad or AO3 or anything, in my life!"

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Moreee

"We needed more please "

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Alpha

"the writing is incredible! "

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The Alpha 2

"I've read the first book and so far this second is more intense with the POV of Wyatt, He is rugged and burte but love the way he is possessive with Calix... Yeah he has issues holding his temper but he is great in his own way... Like he says he has never felt love like this before. It's all new to him."

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Love the book

"Can’t wait to read the rest of the book!! Hoping for an update soon 😍"

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tink

"i love this story"

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Alpha (book two)

"I know reviews get you hard so here you go ;p also I NEED to see Wyatt meet calix’s family at some point so you better get on that love you bitch 😗✌️❤️❤️💖"

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ALPHA - Book Two

"Please continue their story! I absolutely love the writing, the storyline, everything. And I love how the author doesn't shy away from the more aggressive/damaging/unhealthy relationships. Keep it up."

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ALPHA Book 2

"PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DEAR AUTHOR, CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY❣️ I LOVE ITS UNIQUENESS, THE COMPLICATED CHARACTERS, INTERACTIONS & STORYLINE🥰 MAYBE IF THE AUTHOR HAS LOST INTEREST OR IS NOW UNABLE TO COMPLETE THIS STORY, ANOTHER WRITER COULD ASK PERMISSION TO FINISH THIS STORY, AS IT IS TOO GOOD TO JUST DROP IT??💜💜🤗 Thanks👏🏼👏🏼❤️❤️"

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Alpha book 2

"So far so good. Can not wait for the following chapters. Keep writing."

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Love love love this

"I love your eye for detail and the personality you give the characters. Please please please update soooon😍"

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Your novel definitely brightened up my day!

"It took me two days to read your Alpha first book and this sequel in Wyatt’s POV, which I’m totally eager to read XD. It turns out that you never disappoint me! I extremely ADORE this story and your writing style is not only captivating, but also addicting; I just can’t stop rereading it over and over again! The connection that you portrayed between the two characters are pricelessly moving. Can’t wait to see more of these two in the future. And of course I will definitely recommend this perfect fic to my other friends who enjoy reading as much as me!"

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Reading this in 2021

"The way the story is written is beautiful. Wonderful descriptive words are used, and not super common simple word either. The author describes complex emotions perfectly. This story captivated me i couldn't stop reading. The plot is very well though out not basic and certainly not common or overused in the slightest. Wonderful job!!"

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Alpha Book 2

"I was so glad when I seen the second book but now that I'm past chapter 6 , I find out it hasn't been written in in 2 years . This is always disappointing you don't know if you're ever going to get it to finish the book ."

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Love this

"This book is awesome "

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Alpha (book two)

"As good as the first , looking forward to more ."

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ALPHA - Book Two

"Love everything about this story! Please update!!"

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So Great!

"Love this book so much just like the first one! It's heading in a great direction and I love seeing the POV of Wyatt in this book rather than Calix in the first book which gives a different feel to it and makes it exciting seeing stuff through his eyes for a change. Their interactions are great and the way the story shows more about Wyatt is so great! I hope the author continues it soon..."

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Excellent reading material which is well written

"The book provides for good reading and the story is captivating. .. the characters are kept short which is good for following the story "

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ALPHA BOOK 2

"AMAZING THE WRITING IS GOOD THE STORY LINE IS INTERESTING AND YOU CAN TELL THE AUTHOR IS JUST TALENTED PLEASE DO CONTINUE"

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