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An Exo's Trials

"To be honest, I didn't understand what was happening because I've never even heard of the game Destiny but as I progressed, your writing style made it much easier to understand and enjoy."

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Excellent Story

" This is definitely a good story with a well thought out plot, with well created characters. The main room for improvement that I see is filling in some of the gaps that there are, like what happens after the race leading up to when the fireteam is created. "

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