Dreamscratch

"What do we dream about when we dream? The nameless girl in this story dreams of Aranke the dream eater and a jawless man. I gave the writer a three across the board for effort, as the story, to me, has no plot. The author has given this story a beginning, but it needs some filling in the middle that explains why Aranke is eating dreams and why the country is at war? It also needs a conclusion that wraps up the story and tells how it ends. I wish you the best of luck with this story. NRF"