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Tender

"This book is a work of art itself. The romance is sweet and innocent. I really like the fact that there are no cliche fights, arguments and scenes. The whole story line is different–the good kind. The story and the characters are a breath of fresh air or like a cold drink on a hot summer day– refreshing. I love the way the author was able to sufficiently portray the emotions of the characters and not to mention the fact that the author was also able to capture the innocence and maturity that teens have. There are some slight grammatical errors that I believe could be corrected by a little proof reading, but nothing major. Although I wish the book never came to an end, the ending was superb but I would have really loved an epilogue. "

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Tender

"I've read porcelain skin and now this. I love the way you have started the story. And I really love they way how you showed us the growth of their characters, how they move on from their past...and so on. It's another beautiful story. I'm glad I chose to read this. Goodluck dear author! ❤"

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Tender

"I would love to see a second book of Tender , love it and think the story could continue on into the adult life! "

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Beautiful

"This story is beautiful and full of emotion. The charters are well written which isn’t surprising with this author she does great work at putting emotions into stories that you feel while reading them. I loved the book and recommend it to readers. I’m just sad to see there isn’t an epilogue or a book 2. Because it feels like it’s needed. "

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Loved it❤️❤️

"I loved this book. The author should definitely publish it. I felt seriously guilty to read it for free😂😂. I'll definitely read more of their work. "

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Good read

"Thrilling book! Fun read. Lots of twists. Well written. A few grammatical errors, it needs a little proof reading. Nothing major. Looking forward to reading new stories by this author. "

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Wow! 🤩🤩

"A mature love story. Great plot and characters. 👏👏 Well done! Being realistic is what I saw through this book. Amazing! 😍😍"

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Love the female character

"I love this story, but I feel so bad for Lynn throughout, she has to bottle up her feelings all the time and even witness Jamie kissed another girl right in front of her. Then, rejected her once again after making out. It's so cruel, and it's a miracle that Lynn can look past that and be together with him. Seriously, Jamie really had it too easy to woo back her, he only need to buy a puppy. "

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Wonderful

"This book was honestly wonderful. I read it all in one day!! I laughed and cried and pretty much was just a big mess over this ;) It was definitely not what I expected, especially the ending, but I like how realistic the plot is and how Jamie's emotions (though all over the place) were very real considering what he had to go through. I found myself admiring Lynn more and more as I read on and I just love her joyful and selfless attitude for life. Her honesty and ability to be real was also something I wish to see more of in the real word. Thank you so much, okario, for sharing this amazing journey with us!"

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Great storyline

"Love the characters and the storyline "

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Interesting as expected.

"Dear writer u always come up with something that is based on friendship rather than erotic content and that makes me love ur work more."

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Tender

"The author is such a talented writer. Such a sweet storyline. Rooting for Lynn and Jamie."

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Tender

"I have very much enjoyed this book. I was wondering if I would but it was kinda nice reading about high school and the characters issues. It really helped to giving me insight on just how difficult it could be at loosing a limb. I could even imagine. I wouldn’t want to experience that but it has given me more compassion towards those who have. I love that it really is a neutral ending. We really don’t know what the future holds. And how are expectations may not end as we hope but we can make the best of things and appreciate things as they are now and continuing to have hope. We never know what the future holds. There are several word usage errors, write word but wrong spelling which gives the wrong word in the sentence. And some areas where the wrong name was used. I think the author is good writer in general and a good story teller. I enjoyed this book a lot. Thank you for sharing it. God speed."

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Amazing...

"Started a bit slow, but boy did it tug on my heart strings"

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Jamie and Lynne

"Loved this story get you hooked so much that I didnt want to stop reading "

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Tender

"I really like the connection these two have with each other and I hope for the best."

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Tender.

"Enjoyed this story. Would have loved the happy ending with them both together in life down the road but overall very good. "

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Tender is so beautiful... I couldn't stop reading! I hope there's a second book coming up💕

"Love love love... Now I'm not so patiently waiting for the second book😉"

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Splendid

"🥰😍😍😍😍😍🤩"

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Sooooooo freaking good!

"I recommend this book to anyone wanting a real and deep love story! Loved it!!"

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