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Loved your story
"This was such a gripping and tense start to a thriller. I loved the way you built up Bill's character and his ordinary morning before everything went wrong. The kidnapping scene was incredibly well done the fake van breakdown, the ambush, and the sheer coldness of Joshua Traynor really sold the danger. The ending with the gunshot was a brutal cliffhanger. I'm curious to see how Zack and Anna get involved in this case. "
Slayings and Loans
"It's a nice crime story, though with lots of characters interwoven, if one didn't pay attention, you could get lost in the mass of information in the plot. All in all, it's a good read."
