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Lovely story

"I first read this like one or two years ago and i got nostalgic so i came back. I feel confused reading people's comments. The author already said that everything is on patreon, and yet they still insist for an update? Stupid people die hard huh. Well, good job ignoring those poor and stupid demanding people. Good luck"

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NOT UPDATED IN 2 YEARS....wasted time

"You really should updated your readers to when the chapters will go from preview to actually finished. Cause leaving it for 2 years or so just isnt right at all. "

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Falling in Love with Christian Blake

"I like the writing style of this book because it is very unique and makes you look and wonder about alternate relationship dynamics. Yes there are some grammatical errors, but it doesn't affect the readability of the story. I am currently on chapter 29 , but I am on the fence to whether or not I will be able to completely read this story. The characters (Christian and Riley) make me anxious, angry, and uncomfortable. I know there is "love," but the disregard, disrespect, and often degrading/humiliating behavior display by both parties is seriously bumming me out. I understand that it is an Alpha/Omega relationship and there are expected roles, behaviors and responsibilities to be displayed. Maybe I don't know enough about this type of bond to even slightly comprehend the depth of it. Maybe there needs to be some background explaining the basics of this seemingly unnerving relationship. All in all, it was nice to be challenged to evaluate the bonds and roles within a relationship in a whole new light. It definitely gave me something new to think about."

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It's certainly good

"I read this book at wattpad a year ago, It still hasn't changed and it was good"

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Falling in love with Christian Blake

"I was stupid for not reading the author's notes... and here I am continued to read the Book 2 without continuing the 6 full chapter... well, what's done is done... I was just really excited for Riley and Blake, ah another great plots... And I love how whipped Blake is for Riley... even though he doesn't... wait... no... yes he does... he does show how he loves Riley... and I love the story... this good story... <3"

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Falling in love with Christian Blake

"I was stupid for not reading the author's notes... and here I am continued to read the Book 2 without continuing the 6 full chapter... well, what's done is done... I was just really excited for Riley and Blake, ah another great plots... And I love how whipped Blake is for Riley... even though he doesn't... wait... no... yes he does... he does show how he loves Riley... and I love the story... this good story... <3"

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Falling in love with Christian Blake

"Perfect book. Keep on writing. Loved it alot 💓💓💓 Looking for another one"

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ORIGINAL

"O.M.G. This is the best alpha/omega book I've ever read.(not exaggerating) seriously your form of writing and describing characters are so vivid. # Awesome Writer"

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Falling in love with Christian Blake

"I didn't think I would like it at first but it turned out to be pretty good with long falling in love that's for sure and then his dad fell in love with somebody he already loved it was great family like and the sexy way lol thank you Arthur well your time you took reading this book"

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Amazing

"I loved the story plot , its different and PERFECT ."

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Amazing

"I like Blake's character, weird and mysterious."

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Good book

"Awesome story"

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Really good book! But, the previews aren’t updated!

"Will u be uploading the full chapters now? It says that after a couple of weeks you will change the preview to the completed chapters... it’s been a while and I want to know how the book ends! Thank you! "

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Falling Inlove with Cristian Blake

"OMG ate Elle I'm here na andami nyo palang nagawa hahaha late nako huhuh sorry po pala but I promise po naa I supprt u poooo :*"

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Falling in love with Christian Blake

"I love this story and cannot stop reading it."

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Falling in Love with Christian Blake

"Good job. Love this book can’t wait for the second one"

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It’s great

"Love your work. "

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B.E.ST

"Only one word AWESOME!!!!!"

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best story ever

"i really love this story cause its so different from other bxb stories that i have read"

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LOVE IT!

"Absolutely in love with this book the story is really good and I can't wait for more amazing stories coming up :)"

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