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Awesome story

"Wow really enjoyed this Story. Well written such a sad and emotional journey she took from the decisions she made on behalf of her Andrew and Kara. Thank you for sharing looking forward to reading more of this story, well done. ❤️"

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Captivating and heartwarming story.

"I loved this book. The storyline was real with real characters. I can't wait to read the next part. "

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Great Read

"Great story"

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Choices Have Consequences

"Secrets, selfishness and betrayal all have a way standing in the way of truth... truth, which eventually springs forth. At times you want to feel sorry for the characters and others times want to ring their necks. This book is all about duplicitous behavior. A choice .... all it takes is one choice made to bring about consequences that follow these characters throughout their lives. I do hope that Roger finally gets to know the truth. He was partially to blame in all of this too. He withheld something so intimate from his wife that one has to wonder how he could. He also seemed to choose his lifestyle before his marriage. Or maybe he just took his marriage for granted. Again... there are consequences. He needs to know the role he played in his wife's disappearance. Then, there is the fact that a mother's love is delicate but powerful. Hard choices and sacrifices must be made .... right or wrong, Carolyn (Sarah) does the best she knows how to and lives with her choices. I thought this book was complete when I started reading it so was disappointed to find out it is To Be Continued. I look forward to it's completion because it left us with a real cliffhanger."

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Really good!

"I love the plot, but the sections can get a bit too long and could be broken up some more. Overall, it's really good, keep it up!"

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"Good book x"

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No more school

"Stopped reading after page 6. I was bored reading about school. I am trying to distract the mind from that stress and you go into such unneeded detail about their education."

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Her type

"Good but less romance"

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totally boring story and one side cheating

"carolyn like a slut and she Don't know How to face Real Truth. she just think about Her self or nothing. she a have good husband but she dont how to face with him about her secrecy. her act on whole story royal pain. writer also dont where going that story. "

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