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man alive

"wow! such a captivating an intriging story cant wait to see what else this author has in store!"

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Man Alive

"I enjoyed reading about the lives of these two men, it has given me a new insight into gay love and friendship. It had me crying a couple of times, especially at the end but i'm hoping it was a dream Morgan was having and was reflective of his fears."

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Wow! Movie material!

"My only advice is to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. It helps me. :)"

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Amazing

"This novel it’s really good and interesting!! It takes my imagination to another level! The plot omg! They need to turn this into a movie!"

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Man Alive!

"Based on this chapter it would be the next book I read."

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Fantastic beginning!

"The author writes very well and readable. It's also insight into gay romance."

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I got the idea but...

"Very confusing and spontaneous POV changes made it difficult to understand the fast-paced plot which, intern, really prevented me from connecting with the characters (which are a bit underdeveloped) and the overall story."

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