Okay, wow.

"Like the title says, Oh My Gosh. That ending was one I didn't quite expect, and kind of broke my heart actually. I though Avery was cool until that moment. One thing I did find puzzling was the use of "they" instead of "he" or "she" but that was a minor detail that I ignored while reading it. The writing was excellent, but could use a touch more flow to the sentences. The only reason I didn't give the plot a 5 star was because I so very badly wanted Avery to be the good guy, not the one who ruined it all, but that is just the way it is. Overall, nearly flawless writing and beautiful twist at the end! ~ Kat"