Gosh

"The point of view was very interesting. I found myself imagining this while I read, and I did almost feel as though I were the person - well... - narrating it. I like the plot of this very much, especially the last sentence being cut off. The best part, I think, about your writing style is the beauty of the way you capture the image of an almost robotic creature trying to remember being human while contemplating its imminent death. Your technical skills were flawless, but I would vary sentence length a little bit. Long sentences one after another tend to confuse the reader in some cases, but that may not be too too big of an issue. Overall, a wonderfully crafted work! ~ Kat"