Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Please tell me there is more as you have taken me into a world of fantasy

"The only thing missing is the rest of this story "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Awesome

"This book is heart breaking but I can't stop reading it."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The omega

"I find this book to be very intriguing and well written "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Alpha mate

"Beautiful book "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Binge Worthy

"Aaaah! I can't stop reading"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Review

"Wow what could happen next "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Thankyou

"I love the story so far. I actually feel bad for everyone. Thank you for writing it. I am entertained and intrigued."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Wonderful book

"I love this book it has ups and down twists and turns. Excellent writing cannot wait for more."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The Omega

"Wonderful, but the author should try and proofread if possible before she posts."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Good novel šŸ‘

"Love this novel and can't wait to read more šŸ˜"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Please

"Please write more 😭😭😭"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Yoooo

"Cant waor for the next chapter. Like shit really hit the fan. Like why did Alex do that?? What is with everyone trying to seperate them. So many questions!!!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
?????

"Is there a finish to the story?"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The lonely blue moon

"Good read love the story line"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Fab

"Fab read love it "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
The omega

"The fire few chapters had a few grammar errors, but they have gotten better and it never took away from the story. I have a hard time putting it down. Right now it's not finished and I am still wanting more from the story and the author "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
obsessed

"few misspelled words but it’s okay! love the concept and the overall plot, couldn’t stop reading. although it’s not yet complete this is one of my favourites ! "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Incredibly Amazing

"You are an amazing writer and I can see you going big with this amazing story. Write with your heart and your heart will lead you on."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

"null"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Addictive!!!

"I couldn't find it on wattpad so I hope the author complete this lovely story here."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation