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Must Read

"The plot of this book is definitely intriging. Starting off with a bus ride, getting dropped off, and having to survive a sawrm of blood-thirsty creatures makes for a great book. Once I started reading this, I knew it was one that I could finish. I will add that there are small grammatical errors, although they do not really have an impact on understanding what is happening. Overall, this is a great work, and I hope that it reaches a wider audience."

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Worth reading

"I liked everything.worth reading.."

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Call me Martin

"I love the way you write and please update me on any other stories you have written I just want to see how they are as well. If they are as good as this one he will definitely like it."

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Amazing book!!!

"Love the novel. The author created a very immersive world. I would recommend it to mystery lovers. I rate this book 4/5 "

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Call me martin

"It’s surprisingly interesting. "

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Review by Alexandra

"This story masterfully combines tense survival drama with moments of raw emotion and character depth. The bleak, atmospheric setting a world plunged into darkness and chaos creates an immersive backdrop for the group's desperate struggle to find safety and hope. The dialogue feels authentic, capturing each character’s personality and their mounting fears with compelling realism. The narrative's pacing sustains suspense while revealing unsettling truths about the world and the creatures hunting them, adding layers of mystery and dread. Overall, it's a gripping, emotionally charged tale that keeps readers on the edge of their seats, eager to discover whether these characters can overcome the terrifying odds stacked against them.I hope you like my review "

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You can call me Martin.

"Great story! I love the dialogue and the author has done a fine job of keeping the action moving right along at a brisk and comprehensive pace. I can almost visualize the scenery and the characters are realistic. "

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Never Give Up

"Writing is like a fever; it burns in the back of your brain. This story shows a wonderful imagination and the ability to take a vision from the writer's thoughts and turn it into a work of art to share with others. This is the gift of writing, and sharing that gift is what writing is all about. I enjoyed this story. The pace was great, and the characters were believable—it is fiction. However, the scenes could use a tiny bit more detail to bring the reader into the scene, which provides that fly-on-the-wall effect, allowing the reader to feel they are seeing the story firsthand. I hope this author continues to write and sharpen their skill. I want to see more from this author."

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I like this

"Really good plot, original, I liked it a lot. The author really keeps things interesting, congratulations! Keep up the good work!"

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Call me Martin

"I like the flow of the story, plot and twists..the suspense too."

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So good

"Loved every bit of it. It kept me on my toes the whole time and the twist at the end was a good one. Wish there was more "

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Nice story

"It was really awesome story .I felt like watching a real Hollywood movie. Thanks to the author 👍👍👍👍"

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Great read

"This would have been a great horror movie. Great read."

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Spectacular

"Writing a novel with so many characters in the play is a very bold and challenging task to take on. Writing a novel with so many characters in the play where each one receives an equal share of attention and spotlight is an even ballsier move. However, against all odds you've handled handled both these challenges splendidly! Honestly, I have no idea how you even managed something like this as I couldn't imagine myself being able to do the same. Definitely it takes a lot of skill, professionalsm, dedication and raw talent to deliver this kind of result. Also, aside from the awesome narration style dexterously switching back and forth from one character to the other, the slow, steady, measured build-up of the plot development really stands out. The suspense keeps growing more and more intense with every next chapter, all the dramatic events described therein hit you exactly when they should to make the best impression possible. Also, a perfect way to achieve the climax of the story by answering the main question who the main protagonist actually is and make things end on a relatively good note, with a narrrow loophole for possible continuation. To my mind, this is all-around next to flawless work which would look good both as a standalone literary fiction or, for instance, as a script for a movie or TV series. At the very least, it makes an excellent addition to a reading list of every respectable thrilled/adventure/horror story fan. Congratulations on creating a masterpiece and wishing you every success with the rest of your writing! "

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Very good

"Very good read, very good read,very good read, very good read,very good read"

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Really well written

"Great book"

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Call me Martin

"Loved the story plot Would recommend to friends. Need a part two and three"

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Not too shabby

"So far this isn’t anything to dislike, I would so far most definitely recommend this book. "

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Call me martin

"Excellent reading"

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Call me Martin

"Really good book. The characters were great, really liked Martin and Sharman "

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