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Gifted by the moon ( Rough Draft

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Summary

Girl with a gift. A man whos past haunts him. Will the spirits pull them apart. Or bring them closer together. Ella Marz of BlueCrest Pack the gifted baby. born dead and brought back to life. She crossed the veil of life and lived to tell about it. The Moon blessed her with a gift of sight,sense, and speech. Its not unheard of for the moon to bless a child. But the gift she gave was rare. The eyes of the wolf. To see past, present, and future at whim. to speak to those on the other side of the veil. to cross at any time. to feel someones emotions before they even do. This blessing can be a curse. If used by the wrong person for the wrong reasons. Ella has to find her mate before she looses her wolf and her gifts forever. She has to protect her gift from those who would miss use it. Alpha Luca Darklour. hes known as "The Deadly Alpha" . Ever since rumors went around that he poisoned his mother as a child. Then years later killed his father to become alpha. Luca is fierce and protective. However he has no evil in his heart. Least he didn't at the start. Years of Bias judgement has made resentment shield his heart. Deep down his biggest hope is finding is his mate

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
33
Rating
4.4 18 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Athors note

~ Before you read please read this ~

This is a rough draft. this book is close to my heart. i know any serious reader can easily get frustrated by grammar and writing errors. i am a committed reader myself i know the struggle. i am warning you now before you leave a bunch of bad reviews on the book. this is a first draft... i once learned that the best way to get past writers block is give yourself permission to just write badly. so yes this is a messy draft. i dont edit anything beyond the limits of Microsoft word.

All the negetive comments and bad reviews i have gotten are giving me anxiety. its making me stress about my writing and giving me horrid writers block. i love this book its a close to my heart project. im going to finish this book then go back and repair the grammar and the writing flaws. nothing not even this will be edited until i am finished. cause if i worry about all of that when im still writing is only going to give me writers block that i cant recover from. when it is finish i promise ill fix everything the story will not change but it will be longer, proper grammar, and limited spelling errors.

so go into this knowing its not the best. the story is good but the writing is honestly very shotty. im warning you now of all of this so please dont get your expectations to high. when you read my book pay attention to the stories, the characters and the mystery of it all. please forgive the messiness and keep your eyes out for the day when i start fixing it all.

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author

well you know what they say:
the first draft is to make it exist, the second is to make it readable and the third is to make it functional! good luck with writing this book it certainly sounds great!

7 years
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author

don't worry about it,you can edit once you free....i cnt wait to read it already....i alrdy love the extract

5 years
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author

haters and jealous people will always be negative. pay no attention to them. your are a really good and imaginative writer. I really love this story❤

5 years

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