What is your opinion?
Don't be a hero [SUPER Book 1]
"This by far one of the best books I have read and u really love the characters and the plot and I can't wait for too read book two "
Don't be a hero
"One of the best superhero books I've ever read"
Don't be a hero super book 1
"Interesting just a few tweaks with the grammar but overall it's really good can't wait for 2"
Excellent story
"Absolutely loved this story. A few parts were easy to see coming but they were still handled perfectly. Also there were many moments that pleasantly surprised me."
DINT BE A HERO S.U.P.E.R BOOK 1 has me craving a whole lot more.
"Aside from it needing a lot more detailed description, this book is so good that I was an addict during the course of reading it. You just can't put it down! So excited for it's sequel. Please write a sequel. And soon. Loved every page and I'd recommend it to whoever is reading this totally honest review right now."
Dont be a hero s.u.p.e.r. book 1good book cant wait for 2
"S.u.p.e.r dont be a hero was re as lly good book"
Awesome
"It was awesome 😁"
Loved it
"I really liked how the characters have very distinct personalities, and the grammar was very nice. Although the character IceFire just doesn’t seem believable (SPOILERS) First it never explained how he got his powers, and the they knew it was Jace so Archer could have just confronted him at school instead of on the battlefield. A few other things, but everything else was amazingly put together, great job."
Pure genius
"This story is pure genius! The main character went from hero-phobe who wanted to live a simple life to an actual hero who is on the road to greatness! The author proves that there's a hero within everyone after all. Shantay, you stay."
Superheroes in disguise
"The story has good start up and leading up to where I am, it’s pretty good. Although some parts has me confused since some events just happened out of nowhere, but other than that, good story"
Don't be a hero
"Pretty good story! The plot was good ! I needed more use of the teleport ability though in combat. Keep it up!"
Great story!
"I really enjoyed this story! It was well written compared to a lot of other stories on Inkitt. The story could use a little more interaction with some of the characters, such as Jace and Marshal. Jace being so angry over not seeing Archer as often was a little childish and might be more believable with further foundation. His motivation was not strong. The interactions with Archer and his father weren't very in depth either. I loved Mr. Dexter! He is a great character! And I was really hoping for more back story on Archer's mother and his origin from Saturn! I love the idea of him not being a human, but choosing to be a hero for them. Especially since he didn't even wish to be a hero to begin with! Overall, it was pretty well written with seldom any grammar mistakes. I'm glad that I found this story! I sincerely enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!"
Keep it up.
"Good story so far. Keep up the writing. ........................................................................................................................... 150 characters for a review how interesting."
Don't be a Hero (S.U.P.E.R. Book 1)
"The plot of the story is amazing. Interesting characters. Interesting powers. But I felt the stort was being rushed too much. For someone who used to hate superheroes so much initially, he adapted to the whole SuperHero business way too fast. And there's little emotion attached to his resentment for SuperHeroes since they couldn't save his Mom. Conversation is a little awkward; the interaction just feels artificially. But the grammer and punctuation is just on point. I hope you work on developing the story better "





