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Mystical Space Opera

"What will the future bring? How will humans settle space? How will computers help us there, and will they learn to meditate? These and more questions get an answr in this fun Episodical somwhere between Star Trek and Shaolin. We follow a Team of Soilder-Monks. on their missions and inbetween, seeing them interact with Hostages, Gods, enemies and the spirits of the recently deceased. Their religion gives powers that should have left more imprints on history. Watch them fight the somewhat evil empire and the chaos it tries to spread. See them support a new free League in behind the scenes deals that are in no way as shady as impersonating a Goddess. It is a fun read if you have a understading of spiritualism or. if you want your spaceships written from a new perspective. Greatly recommended."

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A masterpiece

"I have absolute love and respect to your skills as a story teller, master world builder and an amazing strategist! I absolutely love it."

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God's Dogs

"This author takes an original approach to the sci fi genre by integrating a Buddhist/meditation/martial arts ethic into the lives of the main characters. This choice provides the background for new kinds of motivation and character development. The story takes the reader through a series of political scenarios that I have not seen in any other novel. It is entertaining, thought provoking and stimulating, all in the context of an action filled story line. I particularly like the way he brings an AI into the mix by allowing it to be neurologically tied to a human character. Excellent read!!"

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Love it!

"I love the mix of adventure, Sci Fi and spirituality. Fun read! I recommend!"

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High Adventure and Thought Provoking

"I couldn't put this book down. I stayed up too late one night and was almost late for work the next day because of reading it.. The book weaves science fiction, special ops, AI, shamanism and meditation into a very tightly written story that is both high adventure and thought provoking. Be ready for a wild ride and the transformation of societies to higher states of consciousness. I look forward to another book with the Coyote team. It is that good. I recommend it ."

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Gods Dogs

"There were points in the story that needed their own chapters but were dispatched in a paragraph. Overall I loved the book."

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