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Beautiful story

"Very capturing plot and writing. I'm most certainly speechless to how excellent this story is. (I'd like to see more hobixreader moments but it's up to you. 👍) Can't wait for more!! ❤️💚❤️"

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Good

"The story is amazing. I love how the novel begins but ended somehow it disappointed me. I think instead of demonic creatures the ending should also be based on reality. Or at least there should have been hints about supernatural creatures from the start. And the language of the story needs balance. Sometimes it's too formal and sometimes there is too much of cussing and swearing. "

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Very good!

"I love the plot, everything, it’s very enticing and you have captured the idea well with amazing words that emphasise what the protagonist is feeling! keep going, this book is really good"

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