What is your opinion?
Fascinating
"I wasn't even planning on reading this story, but I glanced at the beginning and was sucked right in by the first paragraph. This story seemed very unique to any fantasy that I have read because of the technology involved. It reminded me of Skyrim a little bit. The beginning interaction between the nephew and his uncle was intense....and then hilarious. I loved it. The protagonist, Amando, is quite enjoyable, even in his arrogance. And the other characters are just as interesting. I liked his cousin's thoughts on what it was to be a royal and the way you made Amando's visit feel nostalgic. This is one of the best stories that I've read on here so far, and I hope that you will add more to it soon. It thrust me right into the story and kept me drawn to the very end. Also, his interaction with DIANA was quite enjoyable too. Great work! Please, let me know when and if you post more."
Repayment
"Hi, Thank you for your review, so I decided to return the favor. Your story is very good, but your dialogue overpowers your entire first chapter! It gets boring when dialogue does that! So I strongly encourage you to cut down on that! You need a good balance of dialogue and non dialogue. Actually, more non dialogue in my eyes! Your dialogue is the main reason why I don't favor your writing style so if you're wondering, there's my answer. I haven't looked at the entire story of yours so I can't give you a 0 or a 5, so I stuck with 3 for now. Keep it up!"
