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"Thank you for writing such a unique take on the virtual reality genre. It explains the risks that you take from new experiences and how experiencing a different world could confuse you. A great read for people who are as curious about the future if tech as I am!"

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The languge can be simple as there is too much tech related talk everything gets confusing, the ending cound be better too.

"The languge can be simple as there is too much tech related talk everything gets confusing, the ending cound be better too."

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