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Great story

"I really like this story and the characters. I can not wait to see how it ends. Great job. "

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Juicy!

"I'm loving this...its racie, yet comical, yet on the edge of your seat dramatic! I'm enjoying seeing how the plot unfolds."

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Please make a continuation

"This the best book I ever read please continue the story somehow😅"

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NYC onehsismm

"My. One NYC plot it's I sbater jdksncsu"

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Good

"Good so far!"

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Loving the story.

"Unique story line. Excited to see where it goes."

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Almost...

"I like it, it's not a bad read for me. It's quite entertaining. I have questions about the characters but because it's a mystery... I have no further questions to ask. Justin Case is a good name. A good read for me."

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COOL!

"What happened to Holly?"

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"null"

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In Search of fortune

"The plot and story telling skill of the author are most liked.technical shortcomings are disliked. Further grammer and language qualitycan be better."

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Well done stud Case

"In the world of the PI he is a king getting to fuck such sweet and beautiful woman I would love a job like that lucky bugger.the story is very well written and very engaging..il kie the descriptive nature it really draws on your imagination. The story line also3well written and the characters come to life..."

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Nate

"Good writing with some nice story line"

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Is this a story or pornhub?

"It's been a good read so far "

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Justin Case

"3.5 Stars, not a bad read but could be better. "

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Interesting story

"The story was interesting but I think the ending could have been written better. What happened to Holly? It seemed to end abruptly. "

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Why

"Not bad so far...."

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