16 chapters read
Good Story, good writing.
"I Like this story. The style of writting ist good. I recommend It to my friend. "
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13 chapters read
Enigma in whitechapel
"I thought the story line was ok but it was drawn out and boring. Skip quite a bit just to get to the point. Would have made a better short story if a lot of the boring stuff was cut out. It wasn’t needed. "
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