JOE AND NELLY  A World War Two ghost story

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A Most Engaging Story

"I loved the amount of careful detail you provide in the narration; it provides a clear mental image and sets the right introspective mood for the story. Love your writing voice - it's very evocative, and the flow of the story kept me reading. That said, some paragraphs are a bit long; if you split them, it'll help the reader's eye and attention. I wonder if you could take a look at my story, The Last Tree, and review it? I'd appreciate it. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/822460 Thanks! I enjoyed Joe and Nelly very much, and wish you luck with it."

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Great writing skills

"Absolutely beautiful work.!I like the plot and writer's style!Good job!"

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THE COHESIVE STRENGTH AND POWER OF FAMILY LOVE

"My approach to reviewing JOE AND NELLY was different from any book I have ever reviewed before – on Amazon, Audible or Inkitt, or just a review for myself: I tried to think as me as a child 10 – 16 years old, or my own child or grandchild, if I had one, at that age, and what impact the story would have on me, or them. As I start reading I speculate about you, Kim, did you, your Mum or your Nan live through these times? There is a truth and a perception here in your wonderful evocation of time and place that seems to go beyond research. This is a rare find for modern children to read. Children who have no concept of the world before TV, computers, the internet or the mobile phone; of a world where bombs rained down on London, where children were sent off to Wales for their safety in a steam train, and where you went to an outside lav. Cohesion of the family unit, love of king and country, of a willingness to lay down one’s life in the protection of those things because it was the ‘right and proper thing to do’, the importance and value of family love, protection and support, all these elements are richly detailed in a lovely, tender story of two children reaching out to connect across the barrier of death. Granddad is a good strong patriarchal figure who would exemplify many of his kind in those years. The characters are finely drawn and you feel you know this simple, typical family. In many ways this is not just a ‘kid’s book’. I believe that many people of our age group, born in the mid-thirties to the mid-fifties, particularly in the UK and here, in Australia would relate to, and be touched by, the unfolding of events, have a wry smile reflecting on a bygone era and quietly brush aside a tear that comes unbidden to their eye. Thank you so much, Kim, for sharing this moving and carefully woven story with readers around the world. I wish you every success with it, and I am delighted that I did not quickly pass it by, as would normally have been the case. If you enjoy my novel THE PRICE TO PAY half as much I will be well satisfied. Kind regards, Eric (Eric J. Drysdale) My email address is: ericjdrysdale@gmail .com"

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Dorna Hainds

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Fabulous

"After reading this Brilliant story twice, I must say that is Exceptionally Fabulous! The characters are truly heartfelt and believable. The events of the Second World War was relatable to any who have survived the times and those who study history. I was drawn in immediately to the story and I am not ashamed to admit, that I cried when the writing permitted to telling the whole story. The story in itself, I think anyone who believes in love, family, hope, and friendship will find this a definite read."

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Joe and Nelly

"I liked the touch of history telling. I do believe a bit of disbelief from the family about Nelly being a ghost would have been more appropriate. Otherwise, well written for the age group it was intended. Would have given it 3 1/2 stars if i was allowed to."

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