What is your opinion?
Spine-tingling
"Looking through the eyes of a psycho, this is a very engaging read. It gives the reader an interesting, and chilling, glance into a killer's mind. The descriptions and writing style were very good, presenting a clear picture. I wasn't quite sure what he was doing to the girls at the end, but I'm not sure I really wanted to understand it entirely. Creepy stuff. Good work. :)"
Chilling!
"Wow! This story was super well written and captivating. Right away the author instills a sense of uneasiness and alarm in the reader. I wished the whole time I could warn the woman, the whole I was screaming in my head "Get away from him" And that's the beauty of this story. This is a common fear most women have really, is this man I'm going on a date with safe? The POV and inner dialogue pacing was great. Overall a really wonderful story! Good luck in the contest!!!"
