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"One of Our Clowns is Missing"

"Hello James. I enjoyed your story, how you pieced the independent character actions together and the vision people have, even today about Clowns. The School if you will, Clown School or Training program, and the moments that ensured within the Training inhouse and outside with the public was great. Character interactions were also fantastic, their private feelings, what they thought they should be doing as Clowns and what they should be as regular persons, Comedy, bringing happiness to onlookers seemed to be the object, or plot of this story...........even with all the feelings and frustrations that ensued. I hope you continue your Writing,"

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