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it pays to love

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Summary

its just a poem wrote by a 15yr old mind.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

I’m no writer

A lover , you could say

I love someone,who is heartless and rude.

He is dark and mysterious

But I know his little secret,

I’m his ifrit ,his inner goddess

But,

He left me...,why?

Money I had thought

but I was wrong ,very wrong , very very wrong

he came in my life again ...I refused ’can just borrow you, for atleast a week ’he asked

I refused

but still he took me with him

and all the happiness love left in him ‘why won’t you let me go’?had I the right to ask him that?

His face turned into a frown ,

‘Hell would freeze before I let you go’

I fell for him ,again

I gave him my heart but he took my soul

′ you are my downfall, you need to stay away from me’

And again

He left

Now I have decided,

my little adventure here is over ,

I think I should go for a sleep,

A deep ,deep sleep, that I wish, I never wake up from......


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pls wake up from that deep sleep and love again
love life.

9 years

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