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Amazing story

"All I can say is wow! What a well written and thought out story. "

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Finding Grace

"Totally engrossing book dear author ❤️❤️ and ✝️🛐 s"

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Quite interesting

"Well written and I enjoyed reading this novel "

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Finding Grace

"Very well written story of a man who works to use his immortality for good even though his kind are not known for that. He works to protect his newly formed family and lead those that believe in the right cause."

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"This is one of the finest vampire stories that I've read till date. Absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work. All the best. "

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Finding Grace

"This book is truly unique. I love how you capture the emotions of the characters. I can't wait to read more. "

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Finding Grace

"Wow! I was really impressed by this story. It was creative and fresh. It really took me a while to like Evan as a girl name, so I had to keep thinking too much with the Emil E and two syllable name as well, but, I also named my children unisex names that were “opposite” of what people expect so who am I to complain? Neat interwoven story, past and present with its own vampire twists. "

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Finding Grace

"I throughly enjoyed this book! I loved how in the beginning it was a bit of a slow burn between Emil and Evan but quickly they set aflame. The book kept me engaged as I didn’t foresee any of the major plot points which made it all the more amazing. I do think there are quite a few open ends but that I assume will all be covered in the second book. Thank you for such a great read!"

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Very good

"A very good read. I like the complexity of the characters and twisty plot. Also it leads into the next book smoothly. "

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Amazing

"Loved the originality used in this story. Definitely hard to put down at times. Truly great. Getting the impression that Nathan and micheal (probably spelled wrong. Sorry) will become a couple and I’m honestly hoping for that. Our newest member (half breed, I can’t remember how to spell his name) is very intriguing. I thought him and MG could be together since they are similar creatures but I see Nathan’s protectiveness puts him more in the role as a mate for her. Can’t wait to read the sequel. Such an interesting story!"

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Need Sequal

"It was different yet similar from normal Vampire stories. There were times I felt that its like Twilight, but this story has charm of its own too. I would really love a Sequal to the story, following everyone in the group. "

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Vamp

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Kinda like~

"While reading this, it felt kinda like a mash up of the Twilight Series (S. Meyer) and the Dark Series (C. Feehan) with a twist. [Are you a fan author? 😉] The Guardians had me thinking of the Carpathian warriors. 😁 [esp. that part when they offered dem blood to Emil] 😁 Overall, even with some plot holes (they were'nt that big of a deal like in some books I've been through), this is a nice and interesting book. 👍 *well written, too* PS. The (medical) scenes are real awesome and exciting, gets me hooked everytime."

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Interesting and good!

"It's interesting to see a different vampire novel and I've read many. I love reading the interactions between Emil and Evan. They're adorable and really relatable."

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Finding Grace

"Truth be told. I don't really like vampire novels. But I found this one without knowing that it was one and started reading it, not gonna lie, chapter 1 was kind of boring but interesting at the same time, so I kept reading. It does have some plot twists, nothing really out of this world tho. Suspence. Love. Eternity. "

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Interesting but...

"At first I was reading the Twilight remix.It became more interestinng as I read further into the story and the plot became more original. There are quite a few loose ends also.Maybe you are ready to write a second book so your are pointing out about it. Some of the situations in this book gave me sensations of dejavu. I read a lot of books/fanfics and watched too many tv shows so there may be some inspiration from those.-shrugs- In all,good job,keep going and hope for better ideas in the future."

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