Instantly Engulfing

"Within the first few sentences, I was drawn in and craving more. With descriptive language and a perfectly paced plot- I couldn't get enough. The main character has issues and I like how you don't just say he has depression- you show it. You're not glorifying mental illness you're stating how it is and I love that. There are a few mistakes here and there but they're trivial and don't take away from the flow of the story. All in all, with an intriguing plot and lovely description, you've made a 5-star book. I can't wait for more."