What is your opinion?
Magenta
"This was brutally powerful. Well observed, too; if the end of the world did come in a blaze of magenta light, I think this is exactly how it would play out. The numbing acceptance of personal loss, the newly fatalist approach to life ("nothing much to live for except beauty"), etc. What a wonderful characterization you've given for the dark-haired woman who lost her mother. Very strong; also tragic. She definitely earns the 'survivalist' title that the narrator has given her. Your details are well-chosen and very evocative, particularly those in suburbia, the woman's white dress, the camping trailer, and the woman's dark hair mingling with the night sky. I felt like I was in a film. Also, I love the picture you chose for the banner; it evokes an environment I know well, and it helps conjure up the proper atmosphere for you story, in my opinion."
Poetic, Lovely
"Really cool glimpses of back-story. Felt like a dream landscape, and the writing style is really captivating. I think it's a great length and very poetic in its delivery. The most important part of a piece of writing to me is the feeling i'm left with and this left me with a hair-tingling kind of desolation which means that I definitely identified with the characters. Great post-apocalyptic work, and a fresh idea on it."
