What is your opinion?
Sooo gooddd
"Soooo good "
Wow
"Your good at writing, I liked it😂"
Awesome
"More smuts "
Most of it was pretty good, but could work on some things
"So, please don’t get offended, these are just my opinions and you can brush them off if you want. I’d suggest you get an editor if you are looking forward to writing more books in the future. You could also work with an editor on your writing skill. Using time skips can be helpful, but when you use them too often they seem very amateurish. Also, when you’re writing smut, as embarrassing as it is, it helps to add detail. I don’t mean detail as in the process, but the romantic moments or pauses during the...process. You have very nice plots, but I think with an editor you could make your books even better!! I’m an editor for many books on Wattpad and Inkitt and I would gladly offer my services for free if you choose to. Now, I seem to be self-promoting myself but that’s not the case. You can easily reject my offer and I would take no offense. Message me if you’re interested :)"
Okau
"Nice cool u can done great noive "
