Inkitt
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Really enjoyed reading it!

"I just finished your book and absolutely loved it! The story was gripping and the characters were fantastic. I’d love to chat more about your ideas and maybe discuss some potential collaborations Looking forward to connecting!"

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Store spirits

"J’ai adoré cette nouvelle rafraichissante et divertissante, je ne peux pas juger le style, ni la rigueur de la grammaire , je n’ai pas rencontré de difficultés à suivre l’histoire"

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Awwww...

"I love a good smut but this is awww worthy😍"

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WELL DETAILED

"It's a nice story "

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The story is interesting and unique.

"Madam! Can you email me this story. I want to translate it in urdu language?"

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Good so far

"The book is a little slow moving but full of the makings of a believable world. I hope it's completed!"

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The storm spirit

"Woww.... Really loved the book.. 💙💙💙💙💙"

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It is amazing............. I would give this story 5 stars....

"I don't know what to tell... But it is amazing... Thank you so much dear author for suggesting a very nice story ... I wish If these all happened in my life.... To meet with an alien ..... I would be cool.... Like she said😂"

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Enchanting

"I am truly hoping there will be another book to this one. I look forward to reading more. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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A Great Start

"I think the plot of this story is interesting. The author is good at being descriptive. However, it would be better if the author painted the picture for the reader instead of just telling the reader what's happening play-by-play. Similarly, the story would keep more interest if the sentence structures were more complex and varied. I also caught a few typos. In general, though, I think this story could be the start of something nice with a bit more work."

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Enchanting!

"The beach theme is a great touch! I'm definitely interested to see how storm spirits are incorporated into this story! Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged!"

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Alien

"The idea of this book is a good one but char just seems like a bitch to me, I can't really like her character sorry. "

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