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Boats and land
"Different but it's a good read"
In the After
"In a time of deadly viruses six experimental ships sail from port to see if man can permanently live on water. Generations later they discover that their plan has a deadly flaw, that if not repaired could mean death for all aboard. This story is not a complete, and has a good story line, but needs editing as words are missing in sentences and some sentences make no sense. I found out that if you hit read aloud and listen to your story, you will be able to hear all mistakes and thus correct them. I will reserve further comment after reading the rest of this story. 1"
