What is your opinion?
Fearing the Mafia
"That's amazing and can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!! "
My Review
"Love the line "His feisty sea"! That's so creative and sounds so poetic! There are some areas you can improve on based on this poem. Firstly, I noticed there are some grammar mistakes. Secondly, I think this has a lot of potential! I just think you could do a better job painting images in a reader's head and also try practicing more. Still a great poem. 4/5! "
Full of Promise
"To my mind your short introduction offers great promise and has the potential to bring alive a wonderful read, I noticed some errors and it would enable the story to flow if these were to be corrected, that said I shall seek out your novel and have a read. Keep writing and bring your thoughts and words to life."
