Great Witty Banter

"The witty remarks as two characters argued really got me hooked straight away. I just seem to LOVE characters that aren't afraid to be themselves. The story sets an intriguing premise and the whole time reading, it was enjoyable. The flow of the story was great and so were the word choices and descriptions. One thing is just making sure its not too predictable, while its not the story, I feel needs to have a sense of realism that makes it seem less like a story and more like real life. Overall excellent and I would highly recommend it. I hope the author keeps on writing!"