My Ocean Blue
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My Ocean Blue

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Summary

Shattered pieces drowning. They've all been left behind.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

I'm struggling to keep

my head above the water

I sink into depression

And I see how it's pathetic

I feel like an idiot

every time I ask for help

to keep myself afloat

All attempts to keep from drowning

just drag me further down

Down into the Ocean Blue

I have no business above water

If i stay I will shatter

And so I sink on down

Down into the Ocean Blue

I have no business above water

If I stay I will be left behind

I can't keep up

I can't stay above the water

I sink into depression

There is no lifeguard

to save me now

The waves come crashing down

I crumble underneath their weight

And now slowly I will drown

All attempts to keep from drowning

just drag me further down

Down into the Ocean Blue

I have no business above water

If i stay I will shatter

And so I sink on down

Down into the Ocean Blue

If I stay I will be left behind

I will drown but never die

I will drown but never die

I will sink into the Ocean Blue

Staying above will shatter me

And the world will leave me behind

And I will be left

to drown deep down

in the Ocean Blue

My shattered pieces sink into

the depths of my despair

My only friend

is this Ocean Blue

That keeps me up

but drags me down

This Ocean Blue

My Ocean Blue

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