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"Hello! I just read the only chapter in your story. You have done here a mixture of letters, in which there have been times that you used italics in the first and second vocals. The narrative was a bit confusing because sometimes I got lost trying to figure out who the character I was reading the speech was. But that did not stop me from continuing to read. Unfortunately there is only one chapter. I wanted very much to continue reading the beautiful story. As soon as I have more chapter, please let me know because I am anxious to read it again."