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City Life

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Summary

city

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

His daily commute

Crowds swarm

They don't see

Him trip and fall

Full impact upon the shoulder

He's dislocated it

He doesn't say anything

Uses one arm to shove the other back into place

"Click"

He continues on his way

His eyes look amused

When he sees another do the same thing

And cries out in pain

Nobody helps

Someone trips him

He falls again

Breaks his nose

He faces the person who trips him

Pulls his own nose up and back

Making sure they watch him

"Snap"

"Nice trick" the person says

His destination lies

On the other side of the street

He J-walks

Gets hit by a car

It stops, he flies

He lands with a thud

People go to help him

It is not needed

He sits up

His leg bent off to the side

He pushes it back

And "snap" like it never happened

He breathes out and his ribs

Are back in place

Finally he stands

Head off to the side

Grabs a hold

Jerking his head to the natural position

And everyone hears the loud "crack" his neck makes

He leaves

to get where he needs to go

Everyone else wanders off

And the driver continues on his way

In his office

He emails "destroy them"

and leaves

Down the stairs he slips

Falling down one after another

He breaks

And lies forgotten

In the corner of the city's mind

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