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wraith
The smell of hell has come to sell
The burgeoning desire of flesh and metal
The hunters of the hunted become the hunted
Themselves
By a superior race
Crush the flower
Under your foot
There is no need for
color
Red dread
From flashes of yellow and white
Swaths of rage
Shall burn
Everything
In it's path
Drain me of life
To become
Just like you
The corruption
The dogma
The asinine influences
Of what you are
Shall betray
What you are capable of
My lovely wraith friend
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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dtjenkins5: A good read with all the complexities of relationships. The twists and turns of the plot add a special dimension.
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Karly Mcferran: Very cute story! I cheered when they finally admired their feelings! Very well done!
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Angela: A good story so far. I like Amora's character and the ideas such as, Aiden taken power over the pack and stripping Amora of her title. The drama around how Aiden tortured Amora carving his name into her skin was dramatic which I liked. Gave the story some substance. When Aiden captures Amora and beg...
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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Caroline Lawson: This is really high quality writing. The plot is complicated and the characters well developed. It’s the best I’ve read yet!
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sengmanymany: Très belle histoire , il y a de moment drôlesEt touchants
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