What is your opinion?
I love this story!
"Sophie you did such a wonderful job writing this story."
Under the Crab Apple Tree
"The plot is strong. It opens it up to a lot of character development and a bit of adventure. It doesn't feel rushed. The word choice is so transporting, it communicates the sense of mystery and magical connection fluidly. I can read it very easily, I don't feel stuttered or stopped my the grammar. I am enjoying it, The writer immediately grabbed my attention and is keeping it."
Great start
"A few abrupt transitions, but overall a great read. Love the hints of deeper things that keep you guessing as to true motives. Well developed style. I'd love to see where this could go."
Magical novel!
"Very imaginative story with good character development and well conceived fantasy world. Loved it! "
I loved it!
"It's an amazing story, and the amount of detail was impressive. So far, you've done an amazing job developing the characters and plot."
amazing
"I really like your writing and I did not fall a sleep yay"
Amazing
"I liked it and nice work"
Excellent!!!
"I really like your story! You are very detailed."
Amazing descriptions!!!
"This story is incredibly descriptive and really intrigued me!! I love it!!!"
FANTASTIC
"This is a great story. I love the name Erin by the way."
identified with the character
"I really enjoyed the "present time" that the author created for the reader. I felt like I was walking alongside the main character and experiencing all with him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!"
Great read!
"Can't wait to read the rest."
Eloquent Prose Done Well
"Refreshing reading with delightful imagery and style. The author brings you right into the charm and warts of the character with well chosen and forceful visualizations. A fresh approach all will appreciate and enjoy. "
I Say....
"Sophie, You did an amazing job! I am so proud that we got close with basketball. :) I hope you win--- Espero que ganes!"
Leaves a lot of questions in a good way
"I thought the world building was really nice, and I loved the title. Titles are a big thing for me, so to see "Under the Crab-Apple Trees" made me curious. I have many questions in regards to the plot, the characters, etc; but overall I was left with wanting more. It takes a lot for me to feel something for characters in books, and the MC in this pulled at me a little. I recommend this to anyone who likes fantasy, I just wish it was longer :)"
