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Funny

"Funny story "

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Really great

"I love the book I would recommend it to my friends I chose 5/5 coz it is a really great book and i would love to read more of it"

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Can’t wait for more

"Great story can’t wait to see where it all goes omg such tension "

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Can't wait for the rest!

"Please update!"

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Good storyline

"Good story "

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Vandal's Bargain

"The story is good so far. It has good punctuation and grammar. The plot is well thought out and planned."

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Vandal's bargain

"Oh, I am so excited about your 2 main characters - I love them already! Waiting for more chapters to read and I think it will be one of favorites too. "

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Vandals bargain

"Great so far. Jude better be careful...if she's gotta temper like that. He better NOT make her mad...or that ugly orange car will be the least of his worries....especially if she's good with a knife!! 😂🤣"

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Vandal's Bargain

"I know it's only 3 chapters so far, but soooo good! Can't wait for more. "

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1234wac

"This is too short . Hate the suspence "

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Nice

"Still trying to decide "

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Vandalls bargain

"Oh I'm so looking forward to reading where this goes!!! Love it so far...it only gets better I'm sure!!"

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Secret Assassin

"This is a really well written book."

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Great

"Still want to continue reading more"

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Vandals bargain

"Where is the rest?!?!"

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YEs

"I love this so engaging! "

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Vandal's Bargain

"I can't wait for you to continue this story. It sounds like it's going to be another one of your masterpieces. I already love the characters. It's going to be very difficult for him to stay away from her!"

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Vandal's bargain

"Interesting story would like to read more of some steamy and passionate love story in between the 2"

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Addicting

"I love how the writing style is. It makes you extremely addicted and I love these characters already! "

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Interesting to say the least

"If only if only "

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